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Lyrics, Linguistics, And Lexical Genius

Lyrics, Linguistics, And Lexical Genius
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07-28-2012, 11:30 PM
Maybe simply condense to:

I saw it scratched in blood

And work from there.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Lyrics, Linguistics, And Lexical Genius - by Don Lambo - 07-27-2012, 05:27 AM
RE: Lyrics, Linguistics, And Lexical Genius - by Don Lambo - 07-28-2012, 10:50 PM
RE: Lyrics, Linguistics, And Lexical Genius - by Todd - 07-28-2012, 11:30 PM



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