07-28-2012, 10:50 PM
Hey man thanks for the crit! I appreciate it
I'm wondering how I can make the first line into something that's less cliche...The reason I wonder that is because I literally did see this written on the wall of a psychiatric hospital. When I looked behind my dresser I saw something written in blood. Should I make that more clear in the poem?
I'm wondering how I can make the first line into something that's less cliche...The reason I wonder that is because I literally did see this written on the wall of a psychiatric hospital. When I looked behind my dresser I saw something written in blood. Should I make that more clear in the poem?