07-27-2012, 11:38 AM
Wow, I know this is the "for fun" section but I found this so thoughtful and clever. That last stanza is very very telling, and very effective imo ("nights can be longer" was a pretty great line for me). The pragmatic tone makes it all the more subversive. Enjoyed this one Mark
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
