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Another Poetry Collaboration Game:
This one is much more simple (so maybe somebody will actually play it
)
We will start with a short phrase like:
the moon is full
. . . and then the next player will start their phrase on the next line, but imply the last word into the new line:
the moon is full
tits are better
men have tried
which would represent:
the moon is
full
full tits are
better
better men have tried . . .
And I'll leave that as the first line:
better men have
tried
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tried and tried
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i'm presuming you want it all kept together?
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(01-16-2012, 09:02 PM)billy Wrote: i'm presuming you want it all kept together?
That was my original intent. And also my intent was
not to repeat the end word, but rather
imply it.
This is what we have so far:
better men have tried
and tried
and true
believers hope
burns like a candle
in the wind
beneath my wings
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I like spicy
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better men have tried
and tried
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burns like a candle
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homes and gardens
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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better men have tried
and tried
and true
believers hope
burns like a candle
in the wind
beneath my wings
I like spicy
isn't always better
homes and gardens
full of dead flowers
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better men have tried
and tried
and true
believers hope
burns like a candle
in the wind
beneath my wings
I like spicy
isn't always better
homes and gardens
full of dead flowers
killed with a quill
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better men have tried
and tried
and true
believers hope
burns like a candle
in the wind
beneath my wings
I like spicy
isn't always better
homes and gardens
full of dead flowers
killed with a quill
in hand
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better men have tried
and tried
and true
believers hope
burns like a candle
in the wind
beneath my wings
I like spicy
isn't always better
homes and gardens
full of dead flowers
killed with a quill
in hand
some array the army
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better men have tried
and tried
and true
believers hope
burns like a candle
in the wind
beneath my wings
I like spicy
isn't always better
homes and gardens
full of dead flowers
killed with a quill
in hand
some array the army
of one
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better men have tried
and tried
and true
believers hope
burns like a candle
in the wind
beneath my wings
I like spicy
isn't always better
homes and gardens
full of dead flowers
killed with a quill
in hand
some array the army
of one
against many
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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better men have tried
and tried
and true
believers hope
burns like a candle
in the wind
beneath my wings
I like spicy
isn't always better
homes and gardens
full of dead flowers
killed with a quill
in hand
some array the army
of one
against many
legged slimy things
It could be worse
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better men have tried
and tried
and true
believers hope
burns like a candle
in the wind
beneath my wings
I like spicy
isn't always better
homes and gardens
full of dead flowers
killed with a quill
in hand
some array the army
of one
against many
legged slimy things
will never be the same
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time next year
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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better men have tried
and tried
and true
believers hope
burns like a candle
in the wind
beneath my wings
I like spicy
isn't always better
homes and gardens
full of dead flowers
killed with a quill
in hand
some array the army
of one
against many
legged slimy things
will never be the same
time next year
in history
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
