Indicative

[Tiger the Lion]

The indica hits her different—

it’s indiscriminate
and too often 
takes away
more hope 
than hurt.

She’d hoped to sleep tonight.

[RiverNotch]

i guess this just means it's imperative she use a different a sleeping aid
i mean, maybe she would -- i suppose that's conditional -- were she more...er...subjunctive...

[Mark A Becker]

The indica hits her different—

it’s indiscriminate
and too often 
takes away
more hope 
than hurt.

She’d hoped to sleep tonight.

Hey Paul -
I get it indica/indicative.
I'd like to feel more of a sunny day to moonless night vibe, though: more showing.
...Mark

[Magpie]

The indica hits her different—

it’s indiscriminate
and too often 
takes away
more hope 
than hurt.

She’d hoped to sleep tonight.

Meant to comment on this when I saw it first. I think it could be trimmed like above and it loses nothing. The repetition of 'hope' and 'hoped' was a bit awkward. I like the play on words and the fact it's about weed.

Cheers for the read

[Bunx]

As an ex weed dealer my primary customer base was girls wanting to sleep and not have nightmares. Bring sober and having issues with PTSD and nightmares now I miss smoking. I feel like this poem is like admittance of defeat and pain which is not your average weed poem