old pond (add-on game)

[rayheinrich]

    new haiku
    still
    mercifully short

[just mercedes]

old frog in old pond
tries to croak ~
creak

[rayheinrich]

    new frog in old pond
    can't croak ~
    still wet behind the ears

[vagabond]

mute frogs in old pond
feet signing “croak”
sound of silence

[rayheinrich]

    dyslexic frogs in old pond
    consonants disobeying
    the sound of vowels flying

[vagabond]

lexicon sunken in pond
frogs study “croak”
till all letters float

[rayheinrich]

    old book
    words  
    leaking out

[vagabond]

old pond trenched
water leaking out
frogs freaking out

[ellajam]

maple mosaic
on flat fog
old pond invisible

[just mercedes]

roadworks
at the old pond
flat frogs

[RiverNotch]

flat frogs
swim in an old pond
of formalin

[just mercedes]

flat frogs
swim float in an old pond
of formalin

[vagabond]

formalin diluted by rain
mutagenic traces remain
new frogs in old pond looking strange

[rayheinrich]

    old pond
    Jimi Hendrix played here
    mutagenic traces remain

[Tiger the Lion]

acid dropped
in old pond
mutagenic frogs trip out

[just mercedes]

acid
from the factory
killed all the frogs

[Achebe]

frog
tripped on acid
revives in pond

[ellajam]

Acid-croaked throat
mistakes pond water
for lemondrop

(hi, ray )

[fuzzyllama1]

Mister Toad only drinks
the finest of pond water
algae filtered with a lemon wedge

[Tiger the Lion]

Trump Pond
big Kim jumps in—
a wake