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read one hundred times
then suddenly
one line one foot short
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Bloody feet. I feel your pain.
Is it one foot short on one line, or a line and a foot short?
It could be worse
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All its lines are there, I checked the other day. Better check again cause today one of the lines is a foot short, thing is I've been staring at it for close to a year. Ugh.
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Maybe someone stole it.
I've heard they do that. Bastards.
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I was fine this morning, now I've got an awkward limp, hopefully it's just a pebble in my shoe.
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Ha, found it. I may not keep it but it's functional, think I'll go dancing.
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give it a break perleeeeeeeeeeease
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Hate this, makes me feel like iamb a complete idiot.
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Can't be stupider than limping around for a year when all I had to do was change a shoe.
I do refuse to put socks on, though.
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Ellajam - Interesting piece with comments. Enjoyed. Namyh