Skipping Feet
#1
read one hundred times
then suddenly
one line one foot short

Sad Hysterical
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#2
Bloody feet. I feel your pain.

Is it one foot short on one line, or a line and a foot short?
It could be worse
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#3
All its lines are there, I checked the other day. Better check again cause today one of the lines is a foot short, thing is I've been staring at it for close to a year. Ugh. Smile
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#4
Maybe someone stole it.

I've heard they do that. Bastards.
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#5
I was fine this morning, now I've got an awkward limp, hopefully it's just a pebble in my shoe.
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#6
Ha, found it. I may not keep it but it's functional, think I'll go dancing. Smile
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#7
give it a break perleeeeeeeeeeease
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#8
Hate this, makes me feel like iamb a complete idiot.
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#9
Hysterical

Can't be stupider than limping around for a year when all I had to do was change a shoe.

I do refuse to put socks on, though.
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#10
Ellajam - Interesting piece with comments. Enjoyed. Namyh
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