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Fauxku Choo Choo (the play's the thing)

Fauxku Choo Choo (the play's the thing)
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#241
10-25-2013, 08:32 PM
heading into winter
embers alive in morning
brought back to flame

getting head in winter
member stiffening
not from jack frost's bite
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10-25-2013, 08:40 PM
getting head in winter
member stiffening
not from jack frost's bite

ha, good morningBig Grin

bite or nibble
war or quibble
c0ck and snatch
hearts attached
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#243
10-25-2013, 08:58 PM
bite or nibble
war or quibble
c0ck and snatch
hearts attached

Nip then nibble
the flimsy diphthong,
veiling labial vowels
moaned midst love song.

Hi Ella! Tongue
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#244
10-25-2013, 09:13 PM
Nip then nibble
the flimsy diphthong,
veiling labial vowels
moaned midst love song.

the dip of her lower back
above barest thong
releases suppressed moan
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#245
10-25-2013, 09:25 PM
the dip of her lower back
above barest thong
releases suppressed moan

slipped on that dip
caught myself on her thong
by skin of my teeth
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#246
10-28-2013, 12:41 AM
slipped on that dip
caught myself on her thong
by skin of my teeth

today's Aphrodite
wears a golden thong
that bisects every man's fancy
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10-29-2013, 08:50 AM
today's Aphrodite
wears a golden thong
that bisects every man's fancy

toddler
wields her golden grin
pierces every heart
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#248
10-29-2013, 09:17 AM
toddler
wields her golden grin
pierces every heart

sun pierces highland
branches on granite outcrop
A hart breaks cover
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10-29-2013, 10:30 AM
sun pierces highland
branches on granite outcrop
A hart breaks cover

(^^^beautiful)


shots echo
doe then buck
venison
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10-29-2013, 12:18 PM
shots echo
doe then buck
venison

the son cries and asks
why kill the doe father
Veni, vidi, vici
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10-29-2013, 07:40 PM
the son cries and asks
why kill the doe father
Veni, vidi, vici

the buck stops here
rolling in doe
with time to kill deer
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10-30-2013, 03:01 AM
the buck stops here
rolling in doe
with time to kill deer


misfire-
fleeing buck and doe
a geat escape
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#253
10-30-2013, 08:37 AM
Good god finally someone new.
I'll be there in a minute.
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#254
10-30-2013, 09:01 AM
news forgot to leave a choo, god bless her Big Grin

misfire-
fleeing buck and doe
a geat escape

miss fire's young buck bucks
durex used to good effect
great escape
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10-30-2013, 06:42 PM
(10-30-2013, 08:37 AM)newsclippings Wrote:  Good god finally someone new.

Good grief girl, where have you been?
miss fire's young buck bucks
durex used to good effect
great escape

enduring classic
Steve McQueen
ducking Nazis on a triumph
almost a great escape
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10-31-2013, 10:23 AM
enduring classic
Steve McQueen
ducking Nazis on a triumph
almost a great escape

cool hand
on throttle
his ducks in a row
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10-31-2013, 06:44 PM
cool hand
on throttle
his ducks in a row

hen has flown the coup
choking the chicken
with cold hands
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11-01-2013, 01:29 AM
hen has flown the coop
choking the chicken
with cold hands

chicken coup
inside the chicken coop -
chicken?
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11-01-2013, 01:50 AM
chicken coup
inside the chicken coop -
chicken?

funny play on the typo Big Grin

sick of chicken soup
at this food co-op
homeless on hunger strike
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#260
11-02-2013, 10:49 PM
sick of chicken soup
at this food co-op
homeless on hunger strike

got lost in co-op
back home less than amused
third time this week
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