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#1
I promise you are amazing
the things that you're saying..
i see black across this sheet
showing this mind of mine
you are simply divine
you help me show the talent in me
as immense as it seems to be
that's why i grip you so tight
and i'm up with you all night
God forbid it happens
it just cripples me to think
that my very best friend
would ever run out of INK
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#2
Hi TaiiMontana, writers block can be so annoying Smile and it can happen to anyone, i like what you have conveyed here, some of the rhyme seems a little forced at the moment, nothing that a little tweaking would sort out good luck with this Smile

saeity.
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