12-24-2012, 05:09 AM
This was lovely, I like the different uses of color. The poem could definitely hold it's own in serious critique...it stands out with it's originality, images and the scheme.
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12-24-2012, 05:09 AM
This was lovely, I like the different uses of color. The poem could definitely hold it's own in serious critique...it stands out with it's originality, images and the scheme.
12-29-2012, 12:54 AM
Original idea and clever use of colour, thanks for the read. TOMH
my most enjoyed line is "while Yellow would draw the light" If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out |
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