I guess my mind had missed the sign
that pointed to our love's decline.
I never knew what made yours tick--
how well you learned to toss a brick.
I'm only glad I ducked before
my mind got scattered on your floor.

ICSoria
©2011

Ouch.

Really, men just never pay enough attention -- surely the bulging biceps would have given it away?

Loads of fun, Sid, thanks for the read.

the ignominy of it all

(07-25-2011, 08:27 AM)Leanne Wrote:  Ouch.

Really, men just never pay enough attention -- surely the bulging biceps would have given it away?

Bulging biceps notwithstanding, I should have begun to wonder at the point she was able to bench-press more than me!

ICSoria

Very funny and creative.

"how well you learned to toss a brick."

really like this line a lot


Enjoyed this.

David