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"Cute carelessness."

"Cute carelessness."
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02-23-2011, 02:51 AM
A little light's pool
Spilled by a street lamp
Dried at early dawn.

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02-24-2011, 05:43 AM
(02-23-2011, 02:51 AM)Ris Yerg Wrote:  A little light's pool
Spilled by a street lamp
Dried at early dawn.
excellently done.
it's a great image in few words
thanks for the read
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02-25-2011, 04:38 PM
Thank you, Billy!
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