Come
#1
Come,
Let's lose ourselves
In the morning sky.
We'll start our lives anew
And laugh as lovers do.
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#2
(09-14-2026, 10:50 PM)Bruce V Wrote:  Come,
Let's lose ourselves
In the morning sky.
We'll start our lives anew
And laugh as lovers do.

Ah this is lovely. Short and very sweet. It reads like a real love note from someone very charming and genuine
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(09-14-2026, 11:56 PM)matsunosuperfan Wrote:  
(09-14-2026, 10:50 PM)Bruce V Wrote:  Come,
Let's lose ourselves
In the morning sky.
We'll start our lives anew
And laugh as lovers do.

Ah this is lovely. Short and very sweet. It reads like a real love note from someone very charming and genuine

Thanks for the kind words.  It was written for you (and everyone).
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(09-15-2026, 01:23 AM)Bruce V Wrote:  
(09-14-2026, 11:56 PM)matsunosuperfan Wrote:  
(09-14-2026, 10:50 PM)Bruce V Wrote:  Come,
Let's lose ourselves
In the morning sky.
We'll start our lives anew
And laugh as lovers do.

Ah this is lovely. Short and very sweet. It reads like a real love note from someone very charming and genuine

Thanks for the kind words.  It was written for you (and everyone).

Gee, Bruce, thanks! I've already started my life over here, and loving laughter? Count me in. Welcome back.
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#5
(09-14-2026, 10:50 PM)Bruce V Wrote:  Come,
Let's lose ourselves
In the morning sky.
We'll start our lives anew
And laugh as lovers do.

Sweet and dainty. Several millennia later, we still today find new sequences and iterations in which to write our love letters. It's like magic.
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(09-15-2026, 08:00 AM)fastmarshmallow Wrote:  
(09-14-2026, 10:50 PM)Bruce V Wrote:  Come,
Let's lose ourselves
In the morning sky.
We'll start our lives anew
And laugh as lovers do.

Sweet and dainty. Several millennia later, we still today find new sequences and iterations in which to write our love letters. It's like magic.

Thanks.  You're right:  Love doesn't get old, especially when there's a spiritual quality involved.
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#7
These read like solid lyrics to me, like a catchy chorus or something.
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(Yesterday, 10:01 AM)Bunx Wrote:  These read like solid lyrics to me, like a catchy chorus or something.

Interesting.  I never would have thought of that, but then you're a musician, and I never got much past Fur Elise on a piano.
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(Yesterday, 08:29 PM)Bruce V Wrote:  
(Yesterday, 10:01 AM)Bunx Wrote:  These read like solid lyrics to me, like a catchy chorus or something.

Interesting.  I never would have thought of that, but then you're a musician, and I never got much past Fur Elise on a piano.

Ha, I can still hear it, all it did was make me think I disliked practice when it was just the wrong art.
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