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09-01-2021, 08:11 PM
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It is now time for the "6th Annual Poems About Suicide Month" at The Pigpen (3 year hiatus), where we ask you to FIGURATIVELY slice a vein and pour out your depression onto paper (or make it up as that's what writers do).
Use this thread as your cathartic release.
My therapist said
she'd be thinking about me.
I guess she forgot.
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Make it up?
You must be kidding
or chopping wood in Nirvana
to keep seventy virgins warm
(my shrink is named Dr. Islam.)
I can bend spoons of joy
merely by thinking about them,
I’m the Uri Geller of depression.
Everyone comments on my sad faced
dog, looks like William Macy
on a bad day. It’s not a coincidence
that he’s my dog. I listen to
Mozart’s Requiem to cheer up.
But suicide? Yes, it’s on my list
yet there’s so much sadness
that would go wanting.
Who wants to let despair
go homeless?
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1.
I know this will hurt, and
Lisa, you will always ask
Jim and why, what could
father, have been done
Mother, to fix
You'll need to refill it. Depression, anxi- e
too much of a mess. ity. Confusion, fe- d s
I don't make ar, immaturity, self- p
I hope e r t
a e
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dithering
What should I do with the husk?
I don’t want to leave myself behind.
It feels too much like littering
to leave all this dust
for someone else to find.
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara
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Overdue
Fly circling just out of reach
in my stuffy rent-due room...
the report will scare him
then he’ll land for a first taste
to begin the party.
First time I ever will
have drawn a crowd.
Non-practicing atheist
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09-02-2021, 02:22 PM
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The Boxcutter
It would need a new blade.
Curious how careful I was
not to nick myself
with the rusted edge
of the old one.
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(09-02-2021, 10:41 AM)dukealien Wrote: Overdue
Fly circling just out of reach
in my stuffy rent-due room...
the report will scare him
then he’ll land for a first taste
to begin the party.
First time I ever will
have drawn a crowd.
Love this.
The use of "drawn" is perfect
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(09-02-2021, 02:33 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: (09-02-2021, 10:41 AM)dukealien Wrote: Overdue
Fly circling just out of reach
in my stuffy rent-due room...
the report will scare him
then he’ll land for a first taste
to begin the party.
First time I ever will
have drawn a crowd.
Love this.
The use of "drawn" is perfect 
Sadly, in this benighted age few will have recognized the future perfect.
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Shadows from the Sea,
Come swim with me.
Angels in the clouds,
Come share my shroud.
Devils in the sand,
Come take my hand.
Ghosts of the field,
Feed me your yield.
Often you ask if I would care to play?
Every time I answer, "No, not today."
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10-01-2021, 09:14 AM
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Last day of suicide awareness month I'd like to start a list in memory of all the artists and famous people or anyone else you know took their own life. I don't know a whole lot
Sylvia Plath
Ernest Hemingway
Robin Williams
Chester Pennington
Chris Cornell
Anthony Bourdain
Marilyn Monroe
David Berman (poet 'actual air')
I'm not sure if accidental overdoses count.
Chris benoit
Kate spade
Anne Sexton (poet 'live or die')
Virginia Woolf
Hunter s Thompson
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last call
when you didn't answer, I found out the hard way
brother- Ron E. Becker
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(10-01-2021, 10:25 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: last call
when you didn't answer, I found out the hard way
brother- Ron E. Becker
Powerful
I think if L2 were split into 3 short lines it would also be interesting, with a discovery at the end of each line
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Inside the eye of the storm, atop the the highest summit.
Clouds billowing inside his ears, mushroom blue lightning fires down from them.
Choking down the inertia from the first attempt.
Inching towards the edge --no, not like this-- so he gives a running start.
The world plummets down with him as he screams out in mortal pain; amplified by the horns of death.
He fell into a void where ground should have been and now he screams eternally.
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Ant
It’s breathing within me,
pushing my mind out of my brain.
They had to get rid of me,
so they wouldn’t get infected.
I wandered,
on the streets of New York,
and took the elevator up
to my apartment.
I perched by the window,
and waited for weeks,
while it built up inside.
Sprouting from my head,
the cordyceps reached out
releasing it’s spores
to the wind.