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Created by a Poem Generator
My love for Crickets is so great,
my heart melts for them 'til the dusk of day.
The night sticks when them's away,
crack, croak 'til day's dawn.
Them beauty is great,
Wondering mind 'til them sees,
fidgeting is all I do,
While waiting for the moment, for them to say "I do."
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Isn't poem generator just a fancy way of saying poet?
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05-17-2017, 10:11 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-17-2017, 02:27 PM by billy.)
there's a lot of them and in general they're all shite. on an odd occasion one can throw out a line that can be reworked
(05-17-2017, 02:34 AM)burrealist Wrote: Created by a Poem Generator
My love for Crickets is so great,
my heart melts for them 'til the dusk of day.
The night sticks when them's away,
crack, croak 'til day's dawn.
Them beauty is great,
Wondering mind 'til them sees,
fidgeting is all I do,
While waiting for the moment, for them to say "I do."
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(05-17-2017, 10:11 AM)billy Wrote: there's a lot of them and in general they're all shite. on an odd occasion one can throw out a line that can be reworked
yep, sounds like a poet to me.
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What I like is that it asked for verbs, nouns, etc., and then the end result is something of a farce of how southern African-Americans speak.
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(05-17-2017, 02:34 AM)burrealist Wrote: Created by a Poem Generator
My love for Crickets is so great,
my heart melts for them 'til the dusk of day.
The night sticks when them's away,
crack, croak 'til day's dawn.
Them beauty is great,
Wondering mind 'til them sees,
fidgeting is all I do,
While waiting for the moment, for them to say "I do."
Spell checker and WritePoint I've heard of but never a poetry generator.
I had to try it for fun and this is what it generated for me;
My love for George is so great,
my heart melts for her 'til the dusk of day.
The night slams when her's away,
fast, run 'til day's dawn.
Her beauty is great,
Wondering mind 'til her sees,
singing is all I do,
While waiting for the moment, for her to say "I do."
With a fuller understanding of your work, I'd suggest rethinking your word choices...
In your own, each bone comes alive
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)
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These days, women named George and men identifying as women are not so uncommon. I'm happy your lover found a person like you.
