The Cross

Wear it right out front
for everyone to see-
then try it on your back-
when you tire, take a knee...



Admittedly a very quick idea... Thanks for the eyes and inputs...

Ain't been around in awhile as I've been getting some body parts "exchanged" for titanium and some others repaired, with titanium. Brain may need to go next, but titanium ain't hard enough to match that part. Excuse me while I tighten my screws... C'ya'll

Wear it on your heart
for everyone to see.

Then put it on your back.

When you tire, take a knee...

*knees the poet*

I would go:
"Wear it on your heart
for everyone to see --
then put it on your back:
when you tire, take a knee..."
Then again, I'm not that consistent punctuating poetically. Just remove the white space, or put it on all lines -- the inconsistency robs this of, er, something.

I don't know about wearing it on the heart for everyone to see, morally. I'm still confused about the subject -- if we should pray in the closet, why should we show our great faith to the world? how could we be joyful if we must always repent? heck, how could we be humble if we have to speak -- But maybe I'm just being silly, again.

(02-13-2016, 07:24 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  The Cross

Wear it on your heart
for everyone to see.

Then put it on your back.

When you tire, take a knee...

Hey Mark. Unfortunately this reads like a meme. Or worse, like one of those church signs you see on social media that reinforces the notion that Christians are buffoons. See " church signs" on google. I don't mean to be harsh, the sentiment is fine, but I think your writing talent exceeds writing memes for a limited audience. 
P.S. That was my poetic way of saying, nice to see you back.

Paul

Is it a holiday? I think it's quite funny, and it's in misc. I guess religion is in the air. Thanks for the post Mark