At The Bank
#1
Updated the font after a few said they couldn't read it very well.

[Image: Clouds%20-redo%20copy.jpg]
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#2
I feel like the font detracts from the peace.... Having a hard time reading it.
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#3
(10-17-2015, 07:03 AM)Qdeathstar Wrote:  I feel like the font detracts from the peace.... Having a hard time reading it.

Fixed the font issue.
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#4
(10-17-2015, 09:31 AM)justlikeyou Wrote:  
(10-17-2015, 07:03 AM)Qdeathstar Wrote:  I feel like the font detracts from the peace.... Having a hard time reading it.

Fixed the font issue.

Everybody's a critic:
The font still doesn't work very well. I think haiku, simple creatures that they be,
should have a simple sans-serif font. And, being humble as well, they'd probably
think plain old Arial was just fine. -- The focus should be on the words.

To make it show up better you could use a thicker sans-serif, or switch to black,
or darken the background a bit.

Also: Those haiku painters didn't relegate their haiku to the far border of their
haiga, they inserted a nice margin between them and it. Some put the damn things
all over the frame:
[Image: haigamix.jpg]
almost terse
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#5
a drive-up window

threw me a wrench, i'm guessing it's an Americanism, other than that and the lack of contrast tween text and pic i liked it.
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#6
okay i get it now, the title gave it to me.
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