10-17-2015, 06:55 AM
10-17-2015, 07:03 AM
I feel like the font detracts from the peace.... Having a hard time reading it.
justlikeyou
10-17-2015, 09:31 AM
(10-17-2015, 07:03 AM)Qdeathstar Wrote: [ -> ]I feel like the font detracts from the peace.... Having a hard time reading it.
Fixed the font issue.
10-23-2015, 01:03 PM
(10-17-2015, 09:31 AM)justlikeyou Wrote: [ -> ](10-17-2015, 07:03 AM)Qdeathstar Wrote: [ -> ]I feel like the font detracts from the peace.... Having a hard time reading it.
Fixed the font issue.
Everybody's a critic:
The font still doesn't work very well. I think haiku, simple creatures that they be,
should have a simple sans-serif font. And, being humble as well, they'd probably
think plain old Arial was just fine. -- The focus should be on the words.
To make it show up better you could use a thicker sans-serif, or switch to black,
or darken the background a bit.
Also: Those haiku painters didn't relegate their haiku to the far border of their
haiga, they inserted a nice margin between them and it. Some put the damn things
all over the frame:
10-23-2015, 04:49 PM
a drive-up window
threw me a wrench, i'm guessing it's an Americanism, other than that and the lack of contrast tween text and pic i liked it.
threw me a wrench, i'm guessing it's an Americanism, other than that and the lack of contrast tween text and pic i liked it.
10-23-2015, 04:50 PM
okay i get it now, the title gave it to me.