Motion
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(01-17-2023, 02:40 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  Motion

Even as the kids swing
free on a brand new rope,
granddaddy won't go near

    that gnarled old southern oak.

Hey Mark,

Interesting reincarnation of The Family Tree.  Don't think the indention for l. 4 is needed, the space break is enough.  At first I was thinking "gnarled" was unneeded, but the more I thought about it, I think it should stay.

Appropriate day to post it.   Thumbsup

Tim
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Messages In This Thread
Motion - by Mark A Becker - 01-17-2023, 02:40 AM
RE: Motion - by TranquillityBase - 01-17-2023, 03:26 AM
RE: Motion - by TranquillityBase - 01-19-2023, 09:52 AM
RE: Motion - by Mark A Becker - 01-19-2023, 10:18 PM
RE: Motion - by 71degrees - 01-24-2023, 12:48 AM
RE: Motion - by Mark A Becker - 01-25-2023, 11:11 PM
RE: Motion - by 71degrees - 01-26-2023, 03:24 AM



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