Moderated By: Quixilated, Tiger the Lion
Users browsing this forum: 21 Guest(s)

Mild Critique Forum Rules
Due to poets being overly eager to post poetry (too many poems at once)
A new rule exists; One Poem Per Day max in any or all of the following: Basic Forum, Mild Critique Forum, and the Serious Critique Forum.

Only post here if:
- you have read your poem and think it is free of basic errors --
- you post at least one considered, suitably detailed comment on someone else's poem in this or another critique forum before posting a poem of your own.
- you are ready to receive honest, detailed criticism of your poem
- you are prepared to accept advice and suggestions to edit your poem

If possible leave a couple of points in the body of the poem, as well as a comment outside the body of the poem. Ensure that it provides valuable feedback to the poet, even if it's all positive. A simple "I like this" is not appropriate for serious critique. Please comment to the best of your ability.

All posts should be directly related to criticism/analysis/improvement of the original post, the poem. From time to time it is expected that a discussion will arise from a point made in a comment. If it becomes apparent that comments are addressing other comments rather than the original post, a moderator will either move these posts to a new discussion thread in Poetry Discussion -- or for more robust discussion, to The Pig's Arse -- or, if necessary, the moderator will ask that further comments cease altogether. If, as the originator of a thread, you feel that your poem has been "hijacked" or that discussion has moved in a direction you are uncomfortable with, please send a PM to one of the moderators of this forum. It is not appropriate to engage in argument in a Critique forum.

No action will be taken by moderators to censure comments if it is deemed they are valid critique, however negative it may appear to the original poster. This is Serious Critique and not all feedback will be supportive of your poem

Mild to moderate critique
Thread / Author Replies Views Last Post [asc]
Forum Announcements
    All members please read: Save your work. - - 07-23-2021, 02:09 AM
    Giving And Getting Feedback And Critique - Or doing an edit of your poetry.(a must read) - - 09-01-2011, 10:40 AM
Important Threads
  Exclamation 0 840 05-23-2020, 11:57 PM
Last Post: Quixilated
    6 3,379 05-09-2017, 11:58 PM
Last Post: ellajam
    2 3,825 03-03-2014, 10:36 AM
Last Post: billy
    0 2,784 06-05-2011, 07:32 AM
Last Post: Leanne
Normal Threads
    4 99 Yesterday, 09:05 AM
Last Post: TranquillityBase
    2 63 05-21-2023, 09:20 PM
Last Post: TranquillityBase
    6 217 05-18-2023, 12:22 PM
Last Post: rowens
    2 133 05-18-2023, 09:10 AM
Last Post: Wjames
    3 124 05-17-2023, 09:06 AM
Last Post: busker
    8 588 05-07-2023, 04:46 AM
Last Post: Wjames
    4 301 04-27-2023, 06:11 PM
Last Post: rowens
    22 1,066 04-25-2023, 10:51 PM
Last Post: Mark A Becker
    4 235 04-23-2023, 09:10 AM
Last Post: 71degrees
    3 223 04-20-2023, 12:54 PM
Last Post: ZHamilton
    3 395 03-22-2023, 01:38 AM
Last Post: 71degrees
    15 906 03-19-2023, 04:35 AM
Last Post: Velasco
    7 591 03-18-2023, 11:24 AM
Last Post: Velasco
    20 1,031 03-11-2023, 12:05 AM
Last Post: brynmawr1
    6 505 03-10-2023, 03:20 PM
Last Post: Mark A Becker
    12 707 03-09-2023, 04:28 AM
Last Post: TranquillityBase

  1 new thread
  Hot Thread (New)
  Hot Thread (No New)
  No New Posts
  Contains Posts by You

Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!