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#1
This is part of a rant that I was on, but I decided to leave the rant out as it is not poetic.

Jack of all trades, but master of none
In the end, all I'm doing is having fun
Chronological in years, but not in form
Keeps me from being like Dick & Jane "Norm"
Spot peed on the carpet
But it worries me not
He's an invisible dog
The one I ain't got
Piddle this one only if you may
"Mad Hatter Syndrome" allows me to PLAY
Not much for money, material, and the like
Don't give me gold, as I'd like a kite
When its been flown dusk until dawn
That is when I'll pass it along
Hopefully to a wigged-out monkey
Who is singing a piddle song
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#2
I liked your other one better. And I still need to get back to it. It made more sense to me.
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#3
Maybe it's just me, but I didn't understand a lot of it. 'Chronological in years, but not in form' for instance. But I really like the opening line. And the part with the dog. It gives a sad vibe, in a kind of semi-humorous way that fits in. Thanks for the read Smile
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