The minds eye
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I should have been a false eye lash,
flashing heat on passers bye,
lush with thick mascara,
balanced on top of high heels
and a short skirt, I would strut
into dim lit night clubs,
wink involuntary at the nose
covered in powder,
my glue would hold me together,
keep me cool and sharp.
A fly trap for a strangers eye,
slowly closing to look my best,
having love in any form I choose.

But instead I stay in, curled and curious
in front of the mirror,
unglued and comical,
a table top eye that never opens.
I suppose I could balance
on top of slippers and a dressing gown,
flutter at the dustbin man
or pretend to be a mustache
and twitch at the post lady.

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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#2
A fine piece of writing Time. A bit wistful with a sprinkling of humor, adore it.
Heart
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#3
Thanks for a most enjoyable read TOMH, quirky and clever! Smile
Oh what a wicket web we weave!
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#4
really enjoyed the insight of an eyelash Big Grin
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(04-21-2013, 01:50 AM)Heartafire Wrote:  A fine piece of writing Time. A bit wistful with a sprinkling of humor, adore it.
Heart

Many thanks for the comment glad you enjoyed it. TOMH

(04-21-2013, 08:52 AM)popeye Wrote:  Thanks for a most enjoyable read TOMH, quirky and clever! Smile

Thanks for the kind words Popeye, much appreciated. TOMH

(04-21-2013, 09:06 AM)billy Wrote:  really enjoyed the insight of an eyelash Big Grin

Thanks for commenting Billy. TOMH

If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
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#6
i think it does Wink
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