FAKE

[Smiffy]

A million miles from kissing you
Butterflys wings apart
Close enough to read your lines
Hear your beating heart
Invisible to your lips
Silent in your dreams
Nothings never nothing
Yet nothings what it seems

You never hear the snow fall
Seldom feel the rain
Your eyes go on forever
Blue on blue again
Once more I feel the land slip
Leaves fall a quiet storm
Be there angels outside of heaven
They surely take your form

Walking a bubble gum highway
Arms linked in untrue
Streetlights dim to your reflection
I wish a different you
Sugar melts in coffee
Milk weakens the brew
No goodnight kiss to follow
Two ones, a fake two

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I liked the poem and what was constructed. But I think that you should probably use some punctuation, just a couple of commas and fullstops. There are a few places where my brain put them in and I thought it flowed better with a bit of a break between the lines. Other than that, this is probably one of my favourite poems that I've read on here.

[Smiffy]

Cheers for the read and reply, I'll look into your suggestion on the punctuation, welcome to the forum ,enjoy
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