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Apron Strings

Apron Strings
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#1
03-26-2013, 04:31 PM
I am not permitted to delete, it seems
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#2
03-26-2013, 04:47 PM
Mother's travel agents on the guilt trip of life Hysterical

Loved this, just because it sounds so cathartic.

AJ
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#3
03-26-2013, 06:10 PM
I really liked:

I went out to do battle
with the past and future tenses.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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