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[saeity]

She, an ice maiden.
Fire, her polar opposite.
An iceberg, melting.

[escorial]

Hallejulah

[Claire]

I'm not sure what you're getting at with this poem. "An iceberg melting" doesn't flow well with the rest of it, I had to do haikus in fourth grade..it was trouble for me.

[Todd]

Clever use of polar.

[cidermaid]

Hi
I like the progression of images and elements in this one.
Thought this was a good read but perhaps not the deepest in terms of giving me something to ponder over.
But I enjoyed it so this is what counts.
AJ.

[softlyfalling]

I agree with Claire, I think...she is an ice maiden, not an iceberg (which seems so very...huge!) The thought that comes to my mind is perhaps something like Chione melting...but I favor the classical symbolism....some variant of global warming instead?

[saeity]

Escorial- thankyou

Claire- oh well

Todd- thanks

cidermaid- appreciate your thoughts.

softlyfalling- I hear all that you're saying- oh who said size doesn't matter Well I was trying more to convey how icy cold she was and the length of time it would one of such demeanor to melt. Thankyou for commenting

saeity.

[Lou]

Very, very nicely done. You have utilized the Haiku artform brilliantly - an iceburg melting says so much.

[Heartafire]

Hi saeity, lovely haiku, enjoyed.
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