I Wonder (all critiques welcome :))

[tjs2465]

I Wonder

I wonder what it will be like
When hearts no longer cling to the past
When minds no longer strive for the future
When the two cease their nomadic tendencies
And join the body in present time
Reaping all that they can together

[DizzyEyedShrew]

I like it . Very simple and no word seems wasted.
"I wonder" seems like a perfect title as we as humans will unfortunately never completely let go of past pain or future worries. But I'd like to think we can all occassionally let our thoughts go and embrace the moment without a care in the world.