Cheater.
#1
I don't know who started it,
but.
you pulled my hair
hard
I bit your lip
and the exchange deepened, repeated
I was always yours to have
oh god.

so we climbed up the stairs
undressed in a filthy lav
and I fled [and fell]

you reached out, a strong hand, a man's hand
oh.

for hours you pledged
to do terrible things to my body.
I wanted your beard on mine

.

so did you really forget the call you made
the secret you begged me to keep
or are you a good person,
forcing me to believe it a dream?
I'll be there in a minute.
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#2
You're laying on the skills more and more lately.
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#3
which skills?
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#4
You have plenty. And I like to look at whatever ones you're putting up for all to see. I like a woman that doesn't hesitate with her work.
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#5
but poetry and art... well they're both fields with plenty of hesitation
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#6
The first few things you posted on here were hit or miss. But you seem to be advancing quickly.

I looked at your sketches. They're ok. But you're only in your early twenties right? So you have time.
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#7
wow, rowen. stop being so condescendingly patronizing, (age blabla). ,-)
The poem is superb.
Basta
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#8
The poem is very good.

And she can draw better than me.
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#9
he's right, I'm not any good.

i only draw when forced, as of late.
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#10
Well, still not so nice.
And this time the second part of your first sentence matches your foto admirably well.
;-) Maybe you and him are partners in crime and it was just a marketing gag.
But even if so, the poem is still fine.
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#11
If I ever had a partner in crime, I'd wish it'd be a dog. A big one.
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#12
but what about the marketing thing then?
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#13
dogs are great for advertisements
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#14
true! I forgot.
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