Writing

[Loveblind]

The thoughts are bottled up together
Eagerly waiting to explode onto
A blank sheet of paper
Tempted to create something
Masterful out of
My Imaginations,
Ideas,
And the help of
Similes, hyperbole's, or even metaphors

If I could drown my thoughts in words
Drug my veins with it
Create rhymes in my head
That I will recite later on

Mentally ill
Whenever words
Are far from my mind
Because without words
I`m nothing
Without writing I’m lost
Writing is what I do

[addy]

Glad to see you trying out a variety of topics LB

Personally I really liked your second stanza. I'd end the poem with a differect line though (you don't have to change the 'idea', you can just rephrase it)

The thoughts are bottled up together
Eagerly waiting to explode onto
A blank sheet of paper
Tempted to create something
Masterful out of
My Imaginations,
Ideas,
And the help of
Similes, hyperbole's, or even "don't need 'or even'" metaphors

If I could drown my thoughts in words
Drug my veins with it
Create rhymes in my head
That I will recite later on

Mentally ill
Whenever words
Are far from my mind
Because without words
I`m nothing
Without writing I’m lost
Writing is what I do This line seems out of place/bland compared to some of your previous great ones. You can ditch it imo

Thanks for the read.

[billy]

The thoughts are bottled up together
Eagerly waiting to explode onto (onto at the beginning of the next line)
A blank sheet of paper
Tempted to create something
Masterful out of
My Imaginations,
Ideas,
And the help of
Similes, hyperbole's, or even metaphors (or metaphors)

If I could drown my thoughts in words
Drug my veins with it
Create rhymes in my head
That I will recite later on

(tell or show us what you would do )

Mentally ill
Whenever words
Are far from my mind
Because without words (no need for because)
I`m nothing
Without writing I’m lost
Writing is what I do (this line doesn't add anything really)

i like it. i think the title could do with a little more thought though.
i think it needs to be a strong title.

i really enjoyed the last line. the emotion of not writing is visible.

i would have liked to see an image or two in there but still i enjoyed it.

thanks for the read LB.