Dustin ♥

[DarlingNumber9]

Oh god, what have I done?
Am I in too deep?
I just want to text you,
But the mountain too steep.

I want to text, so I will.
But a question in my ear.
Do you really want to talk with me,
Or giving my feeling a spare?

Ethan doesn't trust me.
Is there a reason he should?
Maybe he thinks I'm cheating...
I couldn't if I could.

Am I annoying you?
What's a freshman to a senior?
I want to be your friend.
You'll be gone next year.

Don't tease.
Leave now not later.
I can't cope if you do.
Please don't end up hating "her."

-DN9

[brandontoh]

This poem sounds like one of an average teenage girl's worries. The way each line is so short helps give it a slight panicky feel. The only thing I would change is the last stanza, which, while I get what you're saying, is not as clear as the rest of the poem.

[DarlingNumber9]

Thanks. I'll keep that in mind.