Addiction

[Scorpio4ya]

I want it I need it I just cant go with out it
I just must have it. It has taken over me
This just cant be I am just not me
Why is it that I cant see what this all has done to me
I sit I stare I just don’t care I toss I turn I wonder when will I just burn
I just cant beat this dreadful yearn I toss I turn I just so lost when will this pause just start me again
Im just up im down im just so spun around
I rise I fall I just wish I could stand tall.
Its dark its cold why am I feeling so damn old
Can this be all I see addiction I crave I have just become a slave I pick I pack its all about my next sack
How did it all just get so wack I wish I could just go so way back to when time was so fun my oh my when will this all be done.
Addiction I crave infliction I sustain the truth is im just in so much pain.

[Keith]

I enjoyed the poem and you cover the dark elements very well, you have posted this in discussion was there a specific point you want to discuss ?

[Scorpio4ya]

No just felt like posting see what feedback i get back

I enjoyed the poem and you cover the dark elements very well, you have posted this in discussion was there a specific point you want to discuss ?

[Leanne]

This thread has been moved. If you have trouble deciding where to post, please read Where should I post my poems/ admin

[Scorpio4ya]

Haters never prosper

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[Todd]

Haters never prosper

This thread has been moved. If you have trouble deciding where to post, please read Where should I post my poems/ admin

Hmmm, let's think this through you posted in the wrong forum. Leanne moved your post to a forum where you might actually get some comments. She referred you to information that would help you not make the same mistake again--and she's the hater?

You're being out of line. A simple thank you would have been the appropriate response.