Smokin' Otters

[TwistedAngel]

he wos a pic in Guns an Ammo
grinning with RayBans an stetson
checked shirt like an advert for Winstons
crouched at a river bed
at his feet 20 otters lay dead
showing off a new handgun with scope
i thought
this fucking arseholes a joke
some dickless power trip bloke
hope a bear will rip out his throat
as otters stand an gloat
on his own blood he chokes
as down river floats
a lonley pack of Winstons smokes

[billy]

nice sentiment could do with a bit of a trim

[cidermaid]

Hiya,
Thought the title was great.
And also loved how you packed it with sentiment.
Good original pen.

AJ