[split] I Dream of You

[billy]

so beautiful thank you for sharing...

why was it so beautiful? please give reasons why something is good bad or indifferent to you, to simply say; 'i like it' or 'i didn't like it' or 'it's beautiful' isn't enough./admin

[dark1979]

Wait a minute, my
brother, I'm here to learn
English and make my English better.
I do not know if
I can reply on‏ your question‏ ‏but I hope this be good
"I just read the poem and it
touched my feelings and I
understand from it, some
lines" I wish if I can talk
more!!

[billy]

the off topic comments have been given their own thread so as to not mess up the poets thread.

seriously; you wait a minute please. we are not an ego site. the poets deserve more than just a pat on the back. we are here to learn poetry, how to read it, write it, and give feedback on it. if it touched your feelings, then say how and why it touched your feelings. if your able to respond to me in the way you did, you're able to give more feedback than "it's beautiful. if in the process you're helped in learning English, fine. but first and foremost this is a poetry workshop.

anyone may jump in and disagree or agree in putting their own point of view forward.

[Todd]

Dark, the point Billy is making is simple. If you like something, or hate something, or are emotionally moved by something say why. This isn't an English language thing; it is the minimum level of courtesy we expect in a workshop. This workshop will not function with the level of comment you provided in a critical forum no matter how well meaning.

[dark1979]

Thank you for
your reply!!
I found it so beautiful
for many
reasons. The most
important
reason the style.
Style of this writer is
very close from mine and
that touched my
feelings quickly. In my
reading time I
found it beautiful because
my feelings told me
that. There is something
beautiful in the use of
expressions. "Different
expressions "are not exist
in
other poems. The Writer
made me feel like I'm
the one who wrote this
poem.
This all I can say about
your question. My reply
has came
late and I'm sorry for that.