void haiku
#1
this haiku says nil,
an information winter,
moving along now.
If something happens and you can remedy it, Why worry?
And if something happens that you can't remedy, Still why worry?

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#2
Hi,
Fun read thanks for sharing. Particularly liked the second line.
was wondering if could use naught instead of nil, as the meaning of this gives more room for interpretation depth (also keeps the sonic on the last line / word). But this is just my musings and I do like this as it is.
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#3
thanks for the laugh. i'd place it more as a senryu, but i did like its cleverness.
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