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12-03-2012, 06:32 AM

black gold floats on sea
four an twenty blackbirds to die
unwanted 'Shell' on beach

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12-03-2012, 07:11 AM

(12-03-2012, 06:32 AM)TwistedAngel Wrote: black gold floats on sea
four an twenty blackbirds to die
unwanted 'Shell' on beach

So much in three line, love this. Great Haiku

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