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me 1st Tanka

me 1st Tanka
TwistedAngel Offline
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#1
12-03-2012, 12:16 AM
please read me tanka
is the first i ever done
ok its not great
but i am trying to learn
be nice or i'll break your legs
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#2
12-03-2012, 01:54 AM
I love your humor in it. You just wrote yourself a Tanka, it has the 31 syllables and it's great.
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#3
12-03-2012, 02:56 AM
See I had no idea what a tanka was so i googled it. And besides the threat at the end (jk i love the threat too!)i loved it.
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#4
12-03-2012, 04:51 AM
Thanka for the tanka it was a brand spanka, and I lil bit scary Smile

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#5
12-03-2012, 09:46 AM
Is that a tanka or a mugging? Love it.
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#6
12-03-2012, 09:52 AM
god forbid you ever get a battleshipa Big Grin

loved it.
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