04-16-2010, 12:05 PM
Time goes by
Walking away......
Into the distance
Walking away......
Into the distance
- the partially blind semi bald eagle
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04-16-2010, 03:01 PM
04-16-2010, 03:38 PM
you really mean that?i'm slightly embarrassed being in the company of real poets.it just came up when talking about time in other threads.
04-16-2010, 06:22 PM
fuck off SJ, there's no such thing as a real poet lol.
and yeah i meant it. i really do like it. 
05-06-2010, 05:34 PM
(04-16-2010, 12:05 PM)srijantje Wrote: Time goes byI like it. I wouldn't even call it poignant... like the emotion has given way to calm. Very deft.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
06-05-2010, 06:38 PM
(04-16-2010, 12:05 PM)srijantje Wrote: Time goes by I love it and I know absolutely nothing about poetry. addy Wrote >>> like the emotion has given way to calm. @srijantje You described it bang on.
You give to the world when you're giving your best to somebody else.
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