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a selfish senryu

a selfish senryu
TwistedAngel Offline
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#1
11-24-2012, 06:50 PM
Some people when hurt
Turn the blade upon themselves
I don't, I'll hurt YOU
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Todd Offline
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#2
11-24-2012, 07:15 PM (This post was last modified: 11-24-2012, 07:16 PM by Todd.)
This made me laugh. It captured the thoughts I've held on this subject for many years. I loved you using the blade as a versatile image...sucicide nah! You're getting cut.

Thanks,
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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billy Offline
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#3
11-25-2012, 08:57 AM
a nice change from emo cutters Smile
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