Eternity and me

[Mayflow]

Eternity: What do you see now?
Me: I can't actually see now

Not correct, you can see.
Well, I don't know what I see?

Sure you do, so tell me?
I see sparkling glitters in outer or innerspace

Change the or to and, and you got it babe!
Those glittering are souls, my Hon.

We don't have an emoticon
to express my tears of Joy now, do we?

Nah huh, just play in the light,
even in the dark of night.

It's a different sort of sight?

Eternity:
Yeah, it doesn't need your body's eyes
It's quite precious here!

So, Mayflow, do you like Eternity?
Me: Now, I do.

Eternity seems to think the word now is hilarious...
How precious!!

[billy]

i think it needs a better delineation between mayflow and eternity. possibly one or the other on each line.

was it supposed to be 'world' in the penultimate line?

it a very had thing to pull off, i'd like to see an edit in order to see if you pull it off

[Mayflow]

Eternity and me

Eternity: What do you see now?
Me: I can't actually see now

E: Not correct, you can see.
M: Well, I don't know what I see?

E: Sure you do, so tell me?
M: I see sparkling glitters in outer or innerspace

E: Change the or to and, and you got it babe!
Those glittering are souls, my Hon.

M: We don't have an emoticon
to express my tears of Joy now, do we?

E: Nah huh, just play in the light,
even in the dark of night.

M:It's a different sort of sight?

Eternity:
Yeah, it doesn't need your body's eyes
It's quite precious here!
So, Mayflow, do you like Eternity?

Me: Now, I do.

Eternity seems to think the word now is hilarious...
How precious!!



The word "now" is a funny conundrum to eternity, because in a sense time does not exist, and yet we can say that everything is in the eternal now.