Walkers Kiss

[Keith]

No top to a spire
trees sprinkle golden slippers
moist warm mouth cold nose

[billy]

i like this, many haiku have no title but i think your cheat works well
the seasons in there as is the cut.. nicely done.

[cidermaid]

This gave me a warm and fuzzy autumn feel good moment.
For me the best line is the 2nd. It seams to capture the essence of fallen leaves - soft slipper like quality and (crunchy) sprinkled (hard) golden...love all of that. The description of the kiss was just the icing on the cake.
Thank you for the share. great stuff.

[Keith]

This gave me a warm and fuzzy autumn feel good moment.
For me the best line is the 2nd. It seams to capture the essence of fallen leaves - soft slipper like quality and (crunchy) sprinkled (hard) golden...love all of that. The description of the kiss was just the icing on the cake.
Thank you for the share. great stuff.

Thanks Cidermaid
I like doing Haiku but always have trouble with sillybubs

[billy]

don't worry too much about sillybubs.