Writer's Block.

[billy]

Words like jump and hop leap off my page
whilst others like supine, languish in a state
of flat, along with sleep and smooth
scribble dribbles laterally from left… on through to right
not caring how it looks, or if it reads like shite
unlike eloquence, whose job it is to know
just what is meant, when used with
fellow words, articulate and show

[addy]

I adore this one! So clever and it reads so well. My only complaint is that it seems to be cut short (or maybe it's just me whoi thinks that because I want it to be longer )

[billy]

thanks addy. if i get time i may try and extend it (when i get writers block again

[Loveblind]

Despite it being short, I like it to be honest. The title though confused me. Only because when I think of "writers block", I think of a writer not being able to think of new material to write. So, Before I read the poem, and I read the title that's what I thought it would be about. Anyway, The only thing I really didn't like too much, was the first two lines. It seemed like you could of used something better. But, I must say I enjoyed your description.

[billy]

thanks for the feed back LB.