Doth

[raymond trevitt]

I try to write like Shakespeare, Willy,
I read him all the time.
But then some guy called Pigpen, Billy
doth criticize my rhyme.

[billy]

excellent . maybe a semi colon after Shakespeare and no comma after Pigpen.

at last my own tribute poem . thanks you .

[Leanne]

Ha!

You want rhymes so shite and suckful?
Billy writes them by the truckfull!

[billy]

i have a feeling that this will end up in the for fun forum

this proves that poetry can be fun and at the same time scathing.
bugger, i've just been scathed.