edit .0001. Fish Fry Fantasy
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Fish fry fantasy, arms bare brown,
slinking out from gingham sleeves;
blotched in dots, like mad-red henna,
a hotch-potch pattern of hot fat burns.
Bands of beaded, baubled plastic,
stick her oil-slick black hair down.
I watch her smile and blow away
the wayward flicks of steam-damp strands.

Glistening, listening, three times, once.
Once again then twice with peas,
Five pounds twenty, please, thanks, bye now.
Who's next, who's next? Me, it's me.
Yes pet? Sorry….now, what was it,
without chips, you want it wrapped?
Regular or Moby Dick? Who cares? I don't;
my senses are on overload.

All I can see are her eyes swimming,
through the deep sea of my soul.
How can I make choices quickly...
when thoughts are swamped like drowning men?
Her wet-gloss lips are moving, moving..
but all the words just sound like fish.

Through the hiss of watered oil,
the rush of steam, the clattered sieve,
the traffic noise in open doorway,
the blast of air that's welcomed in;
nicotined and petrol tainted
but soon replaced by vinegar vapour,
perfume of the chip-shop girl.

Oh how I came to know and love her,
how I breathed her salty scent;
how I yearned to press her to me,
a single fry between our lips.
Salivating , wanting, waiting...

Scraps, enough to last a lifetime,
on demand, with Coke thrown in.
Chip shop girl I long to know you,
long to squeeze your haddock hips,
long to lick your sea-bed places.....

Oh, the hell. Make that with chips.
tectak
2012
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#2
this is one of my faves, i have an affinity with the bugger and i love her all ready.

it captures the essence of the english chippy and it's customers.

regular or moby dick Hysterical
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#3
Who wouldn't be taken in by haddock hips?

Great fun, and now I know what to have for tea Big Grin
It could be worse
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#4
There's nothing sexier than sharing a fry kiss with a hot oil goil! She can have my Moby Dick and I'll take her regular.

Your best ever.

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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