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unscathed (senryu)
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05-13-2012, 06:47 AM
I don't think you need the lone comma. Nice senryu. Sweet and amusing.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
05-15-2012, 02:41 PM
i want to find something to fault.
 got it...the' isn't need on the 1st line  i like these when they work and up to now, the ones you lay down, work really well. |
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