haiku:

[billy]

pink apple blossoms
blown away with my straw hat--
i tether the goat

[Lizzie]

I think this is well done.

Nice subtlety with the seasonal element, and the blowing hat gives the scene motion.

Title is accurate, but.....

[just mercedes]

Good kigo, though the adjectives aren't traditional. (I guess you're going for traditional, with the syllable count and lack of a title.) Good shift of focus from close-up blossoms to hat blowing away; lovely final line leaves me to picture the untethered goat finding the hat and chewing it. Very nice, Billy.

[CRNDLSM]

Referencing people.. ' hat' and 'i' makes this senryu?

[amaril]

dope poem. good combination of opposites. the image of the blossoms blowing away is age-old haiku jargon for the bittersweet feeling of change, but the image of the goat being tethered is so pragmatic and atypical--if you chased after your hat you'd risk losing something far more important.

What a funny hat!
The bird bath
covered in snow.

[nibbed]

cute!
I imagined the goat wanted at those blossoms!
Much floated about in my head!