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Wisdom and Insight

Wisdom and Insight
Larry Offline
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#1
02-21-2010, 01:55 PM
One’s a flash of thunder,
The other, autumn rain.
Insight- Sharp and feral,
Wisdom- Soft and tame.
"To risk is to lose your footing. To avoid risk is to lose yourself"
-Soren Kierkegaard
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billy Offline
Are you alluding to me?
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#2
02-21-2010, 05:00 PM
(02-21-2010, 01:55 PM)Larry Wrote:  One’s a flash of thunder,
The other, autumn rain.
Insight- Sharp and feral,
Wisdom- Soft and tame.
not sure about insight being feral but i wouldn't change anything.
i enjoyed it, thanks for the read.
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addy Offline
The Dog's Bollocks.
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#3
02-21-2010, 09:36 PM
I always like your use of nature imagery Smile

Have to agree with Billy on 'insight'... maybe a different word? I know what you mean, though; like a eureka moment.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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