Doughnut

[heslopian]

There is some
truth

in a black rimmed
plate

with a jam
doughnut

on it, resting by a large
window,

the sun pouring on
sugar,

flesh, as a hint of
blood

threatens to break the light
surface.

[Leanne]

Jack, this is far too pretty and contemplative to be in the "for fun" section -- not that I'm complaining, I'd be happy to read it anywhere.

[heslopian]

Why thank you Leanne I'll put it in serious critique then. But if it gets savaged I'm gunning for you

[Aish]

I needed a little sweetness today. Thanks, Jack!

[billy]

if i'd have seen this here 1st i'd have torn it to shit in the crit forum hehe, just joking.
truth in a doughnut. you could be on to something there jack