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"The very short sermon."

"The very short sermon."
Ris Yerg Offline
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#1
06-17-2011, 03:43 PM
Let's go
To inflict good
On them!

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#2
06-17-2011, 06:32 PM
Lol ... Well done and cheeky too! Wink
I've actually met people who believe in that practice.
Thank you Ris
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#3
06-17-2011, 06:50 PM
Thank you so much!
I'm glad you like it!
R.Y.
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06-18-2011, 08:26 AM
I love a poem which can be witty and clever in so few words. Great job Ris!
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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06-18-2011, 05:38 PM
Thanks a lot!
R.Y.
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#6
06-24-2011, 10:27 AM
it's perfect. the title works as part of the poem just so.
nicely done, thanks for the read.
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#7
06-24-2011, 10:37 AM
great read might be a bit wordy tho.

David
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#8
06-24-2011, 11:00 AM
OMG Big Grin. This, sir, is worth a standing ovation!
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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