Different Worlds:

[billy]

she was dancing aspen
he was mottled oak
she taught him how to tango
he trained her in folk

she was a wild strawberry
he was a hedgerow
she a teacher of colour
he taught her to grow

[heslopian]

This is rather wonderful. The structure of the piece lends to its serenity. The dancing, the nature imagery and the romance gives this a Latin feel. One of those upbeat poems which also makes you think. I love it Bilbo. I'd delete the one comma though as it isn't needed in a piece which has no other punctuation (IMHO).

[Ris Yerg]

Hi, Billy!
Yes, it's wonderful.
In some reason it left me sensation that all "was". And now things run the different way ...
Great piece!
R.Y.

[billy]

thanks for the feedback jack, the coma has gone.
thanks for the feed back R.Y.