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Behind a cloud's veil
A crescent moon
Unhurriedly cut
A night's throat up.
Behind a closed door
I'm going to cut my own.
Yes. I know.
A modesty
Is my main decoration!
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(05-07-2011, 11:21 PM)Ris Yerg Wrote: Behind a cloud's veil
A crescent moon
Unhurriedly cut
A night's throat up.
Behind a closed door
I'm going to cut my own.
Yes. I know.
A modesty
Is my main decoration!
Intense and to the point! I like it!
Thanks for this read R.Y.
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I adore the line about the crescent moon cutting the nights... sharp, cruel elegant. Very nice!
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Thank you, Addy!
I'm from a "tribe" of "sky-lovers". I like to watch starry sky. And ... next was writing.
Best regards, R.Y.
